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Author's response:
Thanks for the review! I know, I know. But I'm only 13 with a simple mind... >_<
LOL, im 13 too. hehe, you've been improving alot. the drum kicks in off beat though, work on your rythm >_> aside from that nice song
you stil owe me that review...
-ChiRoN
a five from me, and a dl
If you check your newest song, I've reviewed that. If I haven't yet, I will really soon.
Thanks,
-DJ DaVinster
Awesome
Great work, this is with acid? well anyway its an overall nice song. except the drum loop that comes in near the start is somewhat of beat. besides that all the effects you used were placed in the right spot, except the fade-in drum roll was too short, i felt. the melody was nice, great quality, except sometimes it was off beat. still, a five from me.
i hope you have time to check out my page, maybe comment on my newest, "TechWrecK". that would be sweet :)
Nice job on this one, keep them coming.
Thanks, but no it was made with a program called Orion. I seem to always finish a song that I start in that program-so there will be more to come from it. (But it isn't the best or most stable prog ever.)
I am not sure how somethign made on a computer based off of a piano scale and M1D1 can be off beat--but I will take a closer listen. My only thought is that the conga percussion may have clashed a little with fundamentals like the snare and hi hat transients.
Feel free to check out others!
nice work
Overall nice work. The beggining transition to the trio (i think) of strings, when it gets high, is a bit ok key. . Also, the guitar sounded like a tuba at first (i know, wtf am i saying). It's really low, and sounds more like a bass, and it might be im not sure. You should probably chosen a diffrent instrument for that, or made it slightly higher.
In the apex of the song, near the middle, the silky stringers sort of push everything out, because they are too loud. Anyway, those are just the bad things, if i went listing my positive comments it would go on for pages. Great song, and i know i don't know much about classical but i am not completley clueless.
Check out my page too plz!
-ChiRoN
yeah you might be right. some parts might be louder then others. usually i became more aware of that though.... hm. anyways, thank you for your review!
nice
Really nice work. That guy zerovoter really is an asshole. I'll vote you a 5, and i hope more will be soon to follow. it's great work, the melody is catchy you're right. keep up this great music. thanks for the tips, you really helped and helped me learn alot of things on my own. gl in the future,
ChiRoN
Thanx man, I hope u become a great music maker as well, but until then, I'll keep bringin the tips ;)
nice work
you did a great job on this, you have alot of skill =]
i would just use better sounds, those are pretty cheap, the ones you used.
check out my page plz, a review from you would be amazing =O
Well, it's hard to find suitable music programs that don't cost a lot. I think I was lucky to get Fruityloops 6 for free. One day I'll have more fancy programs though. Thank you for your review!
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the acid synth things....really dont go along with the melody. also, its way repetitive and not diverse at all. but you did the melody pretty good, even with the wrong sounds. the constant effect thing in the backround is faint, but it gets annoying. the chromatics are good, and have a nice almost-echo. the piano like sound goes good with that, but the acidy synth thing gets realllly annoying. overall a nice job, i give it a solid 3/5, 6/10.
look at my music page to, maybe write a review that would be nice.
-ChiRoN
Well thanks i guess. I didn't like the acid synth to much i thought i sounded pretty good though.
yea
i also gave you a 5 to make up for that asshole zero voter. i know how you feel, he did the same to me. nice song, the melody is awesome. just a few things:
dont use drumloops, unless theyre quiet and well hidden. this is because they are cheap and dont really loop. also, you defiently use better sounds. the bass synth is crap, no offense, and the effects, really cheap. download some plugins, like toxicIII is a good one. learn how to use sytrus, and do synth work and stuff. the mixing of the voice gets annoying too. try to refrain on that.
thats my advice for now, pm me if you want more info.
also check out my stuff
-ChiRoN
not terrible
err, the pads at the beggining are standard fl pads, therefore very crappy and they cut off at every note...you probably should have used diffrent sounds. and when the melody kicks in, none of the patterns really go together in harmony >.<
work on putting them in the same key. and you have like 3 sounds just doing the same thing. the pluck is nice, but doesnt really go with the somber mood of the song, sounds more like a sunny kind of thing.
anyway, im being too negative. it definetly does sound sort of ambient, like i said it has a cool somber mood. keep practicing, explore more of fruity loops, but dont submit your expirements. try to make the song more diverse too, not just the same things over and over. good luck in the future, check some of my stuff out too!
-ChiRoN
Thanks for the detailed review. I'll try and take some you're advice and i'm going to check out your music now.
yea
yea the sounds are really nice, you defiently used the right one. that guy zero voter is an asshole, probably has no life >.<
i gave a 5 to make up for him. but the melody changes dont flow, because the melodies are repetitive, so it kinda stops, then starts a new melody, which doesnt sound very good O.O
anyway, the little piano part is nice, adds a good creepy feel to it. but also the part after that where it gets really loud...i would take that back. dont submit your expirements, i have a bajillion songs i havent submitted, dont just submit everything you make.
nice work overall, i give it a 8/10. look at my music page soemtime, and maybe drop a review that would be nice.
-ChiRoN
hay thanks man, I realy like it when people say nice things about my work, YAh im still new tot eh FL game but im geing beter with each passing song =)
wow
whoa, this is some incredible work man. the part where it speeds up is alittle strange, but you probably did alot of work to get it like that so im not gonna criticize it too much. in the melody, the sounds go amazing with the backround string/pad/whatever. The effects were great and give it that g-rave feel. why did your account get deleted anyway? check out some of my music too, im getting better.
-ChiRoN
Im not really sure why... theres threads about it on the forums, and those could possibly be why.. but I have no real idea. I'll check your stuff out when I get the chance, thx for the review!
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