nice work
It had a really nice tense and creepy feeling to it, you did a great job on that. The pizzicato gives it a great feel, but it isnt a very diverse song because its all the same trhoughout, just all these diffrent effects with the cello in the backround. The vibratos were good too, what program do you use? anyway its an overall good piece, i'll give it a 5/5, 8/10, and a download. look at my page too, a review would be nice.
-ChiRoN
Wow I wasnt expecting such positive feedback so quickly, dang thatnks alot. Oh and I use Sony Acid for all of my music, and the samples were from a seperate loops set that was sold sepratly.
really i give this a 9.5
man this song is so awsome! dont know how you can make it that happy!!^^all my songs are minor...AND HOLY CRAP!!...PLZ DONT TELL ME THIS IS YOUR FIRST!! that would be amazing.
listen to mine and PM me if you'd like to do a collab.
great song man...! keepum' comin'!!
No, it's not my first, I've been trying to make something like this since January. It is my first song of this quality though. Too bad I'm stuck now, I can't find any rhythms that have the same energy as the one I used here.
this was ok..
you have some really cool sounds and all... awsome voice plugin...where did you get it?
and your beats are ok ( a little bit unstable)
and the crash just kinda ruined it for me...fl sond fx really suck if they are just left alone. try tampering with the echoe, quality, and modualation...it really helps make your songs better!
overall nice song...
plz checkout mysong; "mawkeetus-Crystal Dawn"
and tell me what you think... i'd really appreciate it. my account is named xx-chiron-xx
Hey thc for the review. This was my first song.
Nice work!
I really liked it. All the sounds and the voice give it a great house/inustrial feel. It would be great for a game or flash movie. Keep the great songs coming! 9/10 and 5/5 from me.
-ChiRoN
Thankyou Chiron
yea
Yea i see you use FL. the melody is cool, but i have a few things to say. The 'For-evvver' is wayyyy of key, it hurt my ears, man. and the drum loop you put in sticks out and cuts short. also, when the sound changes and becomes lower and brassier, each pitch takes too long, and the 2nd and 3rd ones are of key. The melody is really simple (but catchy),and you over use it too much. The song is not diverse enough, you cant just keep repeating/alternating the 2 melodies, it gets boring after a while. any, I will give you a solid 3, and a download.
check out my page too, maybe write a review.
ChiRoN
Thanks for the review! I know, I know. But I'm only 13 with a simple mind... >_<
yea
gee whiz nice song
only thing wrong----all the chord progressions are the same except in diffrent keys, so it isnt very diverse compared to your other songs.
hmm
This account is great. But aren't you submitting on MaestroRage now? so you're not gone, are you?
nice job
The melody is great. But i feel you didn't use the right sounds. The guitar seems kind of...plucky. And at one time you play try to put 2 of the same sounds (the guitar) in harmony. Also, the cymbal clash sounds bad as a HiHat. It's still a great song, dont get me wrong. The 2 diffrent sounds go great together. Overall, a nice job. Could be better, so I give it a 4.
Check out my page.
-ChiRoN
Yeh.. I was kinda rushed on this one anyway. So the drums are horrible.
yea
its a nice song witha great melody, but i though it wasnt diverse enough, and that wana-wana thing in the backround was pretty annoying. nice word though, i give it a solid 3.
check out my music
-ChiRoN
First off, thanks for taking the time to review this. I see what you mean about the diversity, although I was going for a tad of repetitiveness with changes in the background on this. I kind of like the wana-wana thing you're talking about though, and it's really only noticeable in the beggining due to it's quietness compared to the rest.
I most certainly will check out your stuff though. ;)
-Chloroform?-
yea
Yea, I agree with the guy before me. You just need to put more in there. The song consists of just 2 parts, played either seperatley or together, and not diverse at all, and the kick-into is wayy to longggg. other than that, it's a very cool song, and i'll give it a sturdy 4.
-ChiRoN
check out my music too, leave a comment =]
Yeah, this was more a reason test than anything else.
There is actually more than two parts if you consider the break in the middle, the bassline is different there.
i was also working on giving it some more energy, but my computer was to slow to let me add more instruments, and I was lazy to make up a new part.
At least, I learned how to use combinator.
I'll try harder next time.
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