yea
the acid synth things....really dont go along with the melody. also, its way repetitive and not diverse at all. but you did the melody pretty good, even with the wrong sounds. the constant effect thing in the backround is faint, but it gets annoying. the chromatics are good, and have a nice almost-echo. the piano like sound goes good with that, but the acidy synth thing gets realllly annoying. overall a nice job, i give it a solid 3/5, 6/10.
look at my music page to, maybe write a review that would be nice.
-ChiRoN