Great dynamics...!
i thought this was a great, emotional, story telling kind of song... awsome dynamics, cool transitions, nice low bass parts, really dynamic, predictable chords... it is more exciting if you throw a couple unexpected accidentals in there to keep the listener enjoying the song, the beginning had a nice echoey feel to it. Near the end there was some nice hard well set chords that really ended the song well, untill the real end which was a dissapointment, because it was just an abrupt resolution and not faded out or anything...but hey i could be wrong, you may have been going for that feel.
The reason that i gave you a 7 for originality was because it reminded me of the "classic classical" songs such as Fur Elise at one point and it had the style of Beehtoven too.so thats that.and there was one part that was just not right it was completely dissonent... i dont know if it was just a mistake or if it was intended to sound that way.either way it didn't effect the song much.
a ---five--- and a -download- from me. this was a great song and i do hope that you dont stop. you should just keep making them and composing and keep making albums and more and more money... but, please dont stop.
After you read this or when the time is convienent, go to my account and check out my songs...i have a classical coming out soon called "Destined Apocolypse" that you might like, considering most of your songs are classical. there is a demo that you sould listen to. its low quality and every thing, just whipped it up to give a taste of the real thing.
But id like to hear what you think of it though, along with my other songs. my songs have 'mawkeetus' written in front of the title.
-mawkeetus speaking from the xx-chiron-xx account