I didnt know u could expand something thats endles
just had to get that punchline in. im gonna go review crystalline now.
I didnt know u could expand something thats endles
just had to get that punchline in. im gonna go review crystalline now.
cool song
i dont usually listen to house, i barely know what it is. as a matter o' fact, i think this is the first time i have ever reviewed a house song, so you get the honor :)
i like the whole beat of this song, the ominous percusion in the beggining, then the distant, discreet kick when the synths kick in. sounds really trance-ish, really cool song indeed. i can understand why you named it falling down, it really gives you that feeling. 5/5 and a download.
-Chiron
not bad
this song is pretty cool. but you just need to learn how to be more original, and make it your own. all you did was use the standard FL samples, like the effects and hits. try tweakin them, like, in the step sequencer, click on their name and play around with some of the diffrent things in their. also, for the sytrus, like your arp and short synth, well, sytrus is really well made and all you have to do is modulate it diffrently then it starts out as, and click on OP1 to change it a bit more. cool feel though, i liked the whole dreamy mood you had going on. i hope this review helped! check out my page too.
-Chiron
thanks for the help
and i will do the whole tweaking thing... and i will check your page...\
thx =)
whoa, nice
i didnt know you already started it. it's looking good! we are going to the grand canyon today so i doubt i will have time to get on AIM, but it really is sounding good! i disagree with the other guy, i think the melody is quite audible. but the only think i dont like is when that horrible bass comes in, hitting the same note over and over, and 1 thing i would change was that the piano just played the same notes as the main synth. but yea, keep working on it! i like what i hear!
Thanks for the review!
The "bass" is a Gabber Kick. I took it out. The reasion I used the piano to play the same notes as the lead synth is because I wanted it to sound more orchestral trance-ish. I also put in some dance vocals I found on Breakbeat Paradise. I think it's my best woprk. When you put your stuff in, it should be better! ;)
Bye!
very enjoyable indeed.
I can't say i appreciated the intro though. it was dark dnb sounding but it was pretty abrupt, and that screeching effect, probably should have stopped after the beat kicked in. i must say, this song had a nice beat. the bass could be stronger though. i feel that in a drum and bass song, the bass must be pretty dominant. that's really all the critism i have to offer for now. i gave it a 5/5. i look forward to you future collabs, and i will stay tuned in to your page. check out my page.
-Chiron
wow.
this is sweet. i love the drums! the synths too! ahh, i love everything in this song. i which i could make a pounding song like that. you definetley should extend it! i have no critism for this one. its going on my ipod once you add an ending!
-Chiron
No criticism? Dang, I must've struck gold when I made this one. You wish you could make something like this? It'll prolly come with time man, don't get bummed out. It just takes some practice!
sweet
yea, FL rocks. so does vanguard, i usually dont use it though. i can't say i liked the kick, is that the sytrus one? good use of filters though, nice synths. one more thing though...you have that bass synth playing the same note over and over, and it goes throughout most of the song! needs some more diversity. good song, im downloading it and 5'ing it. check out my page too.
-Chiron
sweet
this 1 is cool. i love that orchestral synth you used, what was that? this definetly had some killer rythms, but i cant say i liked the kicks you used. same with the hihat. but all the synths covered them up so it was still awesome! unlike the other guy, i thought the transactions were decent. although the FL vocals are pretty overused, you really made them unique, with the delay and slicing, i liked that. so yea thats all i have to say. i'll try to get on AIM more but my internet isnt working well for some reason.
-Chiron
Thanks for the review! I used Celestial from Sytrus for the Synth that slides from one note to the other, if you're talking about that one. Thanks for the great review! By the way, I distorted a kick I made on FL Kick. If you want to remix this, I can gladly send you the .flp, if you have FL Studio 6 XXL Producer Edition. If not, then I dunno if we can do a collab. Just get it from Limewire or something. Thanks for the review, again! :D
Get on AIM, whenever you can. ^_^
-DJ DaVinster
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great
this is cool, you've got my download. you definetley are branching out more now. why dont you respond to more of your reviews though? alot of your listeners would like replies, anyway. its cool. not very diverse though. pretty much an arpegio going through the song as usual, but i liked when you brought the that cloud orchestra things. 5/5
-Chiron
ehhh...~
plz hold back on those accidentals...! they popped up everywhere and killed it...bad mix of instruments(synth w/distorted noise), too repetitive... the drums where ok. not mastered or anything, it might have been a little better if you did that...keep it less random... like the piano ending for example. where the hell is the bass, the bass is the foundation for all rock songs.
6/10 and a 3/5 from me...~
keep tryin'
-mawkeetus
yeah, well its pretty suspicious you gave to my "walking in the street loop " a mark of 10 and only 6 to this one. i barely spent 15 minutes on the street loop while in here i spent few hours to make it. thanks for the review altough i needed more detail to know where the bad rank came from. i had a special guitar for the bass in this music and i don't know why you didn't hear it, and about the repetitive - i've really tried not to do repetitive parts on this music. and its much less repetitive than other musics as well. and i don't know what did you mean by "accidentals".
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